An area for improvement might be getting to the point a little faster, but still great blog! (:
An area for improvement could be maybe explainging yourself a little more! Making your paragraphs a little longer could help. Great job though!
I think you should improve in the tile. I dont really get it but you know im stuipd so maybe you need to explain it to me.
An area for improvement might be getting to the point a little faster, but still great blog! (:
ReplyDeleteAn area for improvement could be maybe explainging yourself a little more! Making your paragraphs a little longer could help. Great job though!
ReplyDeleteI think you should improve in the tile. I dont really get it but you know im stuipd so maybe you need to explain it to me.
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